13th Picture

Kellie Krim

10-11-12

EnglishIV

                I was over my friend’s house today we were going to the carnival. We were on our way; I haven’t been to the carnival in awhile so I’m really excited. When we got there the lights on the rides were beautiful. I can smell the delicious popcorn being popped in the concessions. The music was loud and fun. People were laughing and having a great time.

“Let’s go on the dropping ride!” said Emma.

“Um… it’s pretty high I don’t really like drops” I said.

“It will be over before you know it.” She said.

                We were in the line waiting. Then all of a sudden I heard….

“Next!!!!!”

The line moved really fast, it was already out turn. The unbuckled the seat for us to get in. I was so scared I was shaking so bad.

“Are you alright?” Emma asked.

“Yeah just a little nervous.” I said

“It will be over before you know it.” She said.

Suddenly I saw the guy pull the lever to begin the ride. I felt the ride begin to start moving upward. I began to freak out about how high we are when it dropped. When the ride was over Emma asked if I liked it.

“It was okay but im not going on it again.” I said.

We began to walk around when we came upon the ferris wheel.

“Let’s go on it!” I said. Emma agreed and we got in line. We got on, the ride began. When we got to the top we could see whole carnival it was beautiful with the flashing lights. It was a great day.